May 03, 2007

Trance

Choked souls,
Charred sun…
Burning clouds,
Bleeding hearts,
Withering hopes…
Fading smiles,
Frozen tears,
Life begun…
Murderous silence,
Echoing words,
Dark horizons,
Frightened dawns,
Yet I crawl…
To reach life,
Somewhere unknown,
Where the sun shines…
Where the rain don’t hurt,
So long my love…
Till then i lie in my trance!!!

6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

so much pain is what is felt in ur writing, i might be wrong as well, however the concept of pain is not new but trust me when i say this tht physical one can take u away from the mental...(Well scars on my body is the tell tale story in itself)... i can't stop thinking about the song called one by tallica boyz...

I can’t remember anything
Can't tell if this is true or dream
Deep down inside I feel to scream
This terrible silence stops with me

Now that the war is through with me
I'm waking up, I cannot see
That there's not much left of me
Nothing is real but pain now

Hold my breath as I wish for death
Oh please God, wake me..

me .. wanderer

5/07/2007 3:57 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Blowing Hot.. Blowing Cold..
This lady's got stories she's never told..

Using words in perfect tense…
If this is trance.. i’ll wait for sense.. ;)

- guls fan

5/11/2007 1:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

So much sadness. So much pain. Yet so innocent and so pure. A heart that loves. And yearns for caring. A soul that gives. And asks nothing in return. You're in love with love. You'll love to death. You'll give completely. With no regret. A paradox. Yet, so true.

"Can you find me sanctuary?
I must find a place to hide.
A place for me to hide.
Can you give me soft asylum?
I can't take it anymore.
The man is at the door"

6/12/2007 6:43 AM  
Blogger Gurdeepak said...

Choked souls will teach to fight
The charred sun will throw some light
When burning clouds will shower rain
Then bleeding hearts will know respite.

Withering hopes will rouse again
Fading smiles or fading pain
Frozen tears; only remind
Life’s scars don’t go in vain.

Murderous silence; a poet’s delight
Echoing words; put forth her plight
Dark horizons; frightened dawns
And yet she crawls, against their might!

To reach life
Or
To reach out to life…
I wish you could choose a stance
But Gul,
In this dilemma; is a greater trance!

10/01/2007 2:18 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Pain and happiness are Yin and Yang as without one other doesn't exist. One can't stay in never ending state of happiness and pain never lasts.

10/21/2007 2:51 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oi Oi..

Gullu.. this is too long a break..
you owe it to your fans :)

Get back in action girl.. :)

- guls fan

11/10/2007 10:34 PM  

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